[FM Discuss] request for proofreading of the OLPC XO manual

[Anne Gentle]

Hi all -
Adam and I have been working on the manual for the One Laptop Per Child
laptop, the XO. I'd like to get more readers and give it one more once over,
and wanted to ask if anyone on the list has the capacity to proofread it
thoroughly next week.
http://en.flossmanuals.net/OLPC_simple/Introduction

I'm also sending the PDF to my favorite technical editor since she said
she'd be able to read through it as well, but the more eyes, the better.

This particular manual is intended for the children using the XO, not
necessarily the parents or teachers, although some of the content can be
re-used for the parent/teacher audience.

If you don't have time to input changes yourself, feel free to email me your
suggestions and I'll enter the changes.
Thanks so much!
Anne
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