[FM Discuss] Further sections needed in the Introduction to the Command Line

Andy Oram andyo at oreilly.com
Sat Apr 4 16:38:40 PDT 2009


I forgot to say that I was doing high-level editing. I didn't bother to fix a lot of format nit-picking, such as what should be bold and what should be italic. In fact, it's hard to tell which some things should be. I imagine someone could polish the style too, although I think that's professional enough.

And the headings are all over the place. Because there are many small chapters, a lot start with Heading 1 when should probably be subsections of a previous section. I can make a recommendation for how to combine files into chapters, but I don't want to go through fixing headings.



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