[FM Discuss] CLI
adam hyde
adam at flossmanuals.net
Thu Apr 30 10:20:44 PDT 2009
yeah, cool work Tom.
Actually you and Andy are in the same town...maybe we should all meet
for coffee one day...
adam
On Thu, 2009-04-30 at 12:37 -0400, Andy Oram wrote:
> Thanks for taking on this rather tedious work. We don't want to burden authors by asking them to follow a laundry list of conventions while they're writing (and they'd probably ignore conventions anyway), so doing it at the end is probably easiest, as you're doing.
>
> Andy
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: TJB <tjb.olpc at gmail.com>
> To: discuss at lists.flossmanuals.net
> Sent: Thu, 30 Apr 2009 12:24:21 -0400 (EDT)
> Subject: Re: [FM Discuss] CLI
>
> This manual is another very clean one. Very, very few typos, but
> since it was written by various authors, it is a worthwhile exercise
> for me to "standardize" the text: examples of commands in code format
> ("<code>...</code>"); filenames and directory names in italics;
> keyboard keys in bold; double quote marks instead of apostrophes in
> text (not in examples!); etc., i.e., copy-editing as Andy Oram
> suggested a while ago.
>
> It's taking me longer than I expected, but I will finish standardizing
> it. I have finished 24 of 44 chapters so far.
>
> Marcelo, I don't want to hold you up on your Spanish translation
> effort. The vast majority of the changes I'm making are in format,
> not content. If you subscribe to get changes to the manual, you will
> see my changes if you are running ahead of me. I am working the
> chapters in sequence.
>
> Tom
>
>
> On Sun, 2009-04-19 at 01:33 -0400, TJB wrote:
> > Ed, Andy and Adam, I will start editing the manual for format and
> > consistency. With about 40 chapters, it may take up to a week, I
> > reckon. I'll start Sunday.
> >
> > Tom Boyle
> >
> >
> > On 4/18/2009 6:00 AM, Andy Oram wrote:
> >> Now that we're in less of a rush, I agree somebody should copy-edit the book. I'm probably too close to the material now. Maybe on Sunday I can proof the Glossary, though; thanks so much for taking responsibility for it, Ed. I'm not sure I'll have time for the Glossary because I'm leaving on Monday for a week-long trip.
> >>
> >> Andy
> >
> >> ----- Original Message -----
> >> From: Edward Cherlin <echerlin at gmail.com>
> >> To: FM Discuss <discuss at lists.flossmanuals.net>
> >> Sent: Sat, 18 Apr 2009 04:14:56 -0400 (EDT)
> >> Subject: [FM Discuss] CLI
> >>
> >> I finished adding items to the CLI glossary. I deliberately did not
> >> include terms specific to a particular editor or scripting language,
> >> and well defined in that chapter. Please review my work.
> >>
> >> I fixed some typos and other glitches, and noticed that the whole book
> >> could use a good copy-editing. It is definitely not as clean as the
> >> work we did on Circumvention. There are some inconsistent points of
> >> style. I don't think I know what they all should be, so I am asking
> >> for someone who knows the style to review them. Watch out for spaces
> >> at the very beginning of paragraphs. They are an artifact of the
> >> software.
> >>
> >> When we come back to this book, I can see several places where we can
> >> improve the presentation, and a number of other commands for possible
> >> inclusion.
> >>
> >> I would do more, but I have two other pressing projects on the OLPC XS
> >> school server and on teaching math in Turtle Art through discovery
> >> rather than lessons. I sent my iconized no-text TA tiles to Walter
> >> Bender, and hope to make them publicly available soon.
> >>
> >> The chat on the Web site is out. We didn't get anywhere near enough
> >> chat during the CLI sprint and its followup, compared with talking
> >> face-to-face in an onsite sprint. We didn't have the oversight I
> >> thought we needed on getting chapters done and reviewed. When I left
> >> off tonight, some of the file status selections seemed to be
> >> inconsistent.
> >>
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