[FM Discuss] FLOSS Manual for FSlint

Anne Gentle annegentle at justwriteclick.com
Wed Jun 23 05:32:54 PDT 2010


Um. I published it last night but didn't email the list, sorry about that. I
saw the same "not readable" messages on the png files.

I added a link to the front page, I believe. I put it under GNU/Linux. I
think that's the right location.

Congrats to Chris and FSLint!

Anne

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On Wed, Jun 23, 2010 at 6:15 AM, John Curwood <
marketing at lovinglearning.co.nz> wrote:

> Ok I have published FSlint. The published manual can be found at:
> http://en.flossmanuals.net/FSlint/Introduction
>
> I will add the link from the FM front page in the morning as I am now
> very tired. Also I had a couple of strange issues come up:
>
> I had some come up during the process regarding images being "not
> readable" in 3 of the chapters, but they were viewable in the published
> manual.
>
> However, The chapter "Common interface items" has only one image that
> has loaded properly in the published image, all the others just have
> their Alt text displayed. (This chapter did not display any errors
> during publishing).
>
> As a final note, all the images were displayed properly in the pdf
> version of the published manual.
>
> Cheers,
>
> John
>
> On Wed, 2010-06-23 at 10:15 +0200, adam wrote:
> > publish it i rekin!
> >
> > congrats Chris :))
> >
> >
> > adam
> >
> >
> >
> > On Wed, 2010-06-23 at 18:11 +1200, John Curwood wrote:
> > > Hi Chris,
> > >
> > > If you want to see to some of the suggestions that Edward written then
> > > let me know once you have finished and I will publish FSlint for you.
> If
> > > you think the manual is ready for publishing with out the additions
> then
> > > let me know and I'll publish it now.  Remember You can always publish
> > > what you have now and keep making modifications in the write section
> and
> > > republish once those are finished.
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > >
> > > John
> > >
> > > On Tue, 2010-06-22 at 22:29 -0400, Edward Cherlin wrote:
> > > > Sounds quite promising.
> > > >
> > > > On installation: I hope that we can separate installation into
> package
> > > > installation (apt or yum) and configuration. Within the configuration
> > > > section, will it be the same on all Linux distros? What are the use
> > > > cases? If there aren't too many cases, can you write a procedure for
> > > > each, or break the process down into short, common procedures and
> give
> > > > a list for each case? I see FSlint described as a toolkit. Can we
> > > > discuss it in terms of individual tools?
> > > >
> > > > Do you have a glossary? Are there many terms not familiar to the
> > > > novice?  Are some terms used differently in FSlint than elsewhere?
> Are
> > > > terms defined on first use? If you cut and paste those definitions
> > > > into a Glossary draft, I can take a look at it and do an editing
> pass.
> > > >
> > > > These questions apply to many other kinds of software.
> > > >
> > > > On Sun, Jun 20, 2010 at 10:48, Chris Stackpole <
> c.stackpole at gmail.com> wrote:
> > > > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----
> > > > > Hash: SHA1
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks for the feedback John and Adam!
> > > > >
> > > > > I have indeed been working on many of John's points. One of them
> being
> > > > > to have someone who is a fairly inexperienced user to read through
> it.
> > > > > This has been extremely helpful in flushing it out a bit more. We
> have
> > > > > finished the first couple of chapters together and with any luck we
> will
> > > > > finish the rest either today or tomorrow.
> > > > >
> > > > > The reason why I was hesitant on adding a install section is that
> > > > > because it changes as more distros pick it up and add it to their
> > > > > repo's. The homepage of FSlint keeps an up-to-date how-to on
> > > > > installation for many different distros. What I did was I added a
> > > > > paragraph about this in the intro with a link to the homepage where
> the
> > > > > reader could find the different methods. I am more then willing to
> > > > > listen to advice and will create a short install section if that is
> > > > > preferred.
> > > > >
> > > > > It is good advice to contact the developer. I will also send them
> an
> > > > > email later today. They could provide some really good feedback as
> well.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you for the help!
> > > > >
> > > > > Chris Stackpole
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > adam wrote:
> > > > >> i took a quick look also at the manual. i didnt know about fslint
> and so
> > > > >> many thanks for the very good intro to the software (which just
> goes to
> > > > >> show that having a manual in itself is important for promoting a
> > > > >> software - the first step to getting a software used)
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I think Johns recommendations were good ones and I see you have
> taken up
> > > > >> some of those. A section on installing, even just to say "its too
> much
> > > > >> to cover here" would be useful as well as a complete list of what
> > > > >> versions of Linux it runs on
> > > > >>
> > > > >> but other than that it looks good...i will read through the manual
> more
> > > > >> thoroughly while i learn about the software :)
> > > > >>
> > > > >> (if the developers of the project dont know you have done this you
> could
> > > > >> write to them and see if they would link to it from their project
> page
> > > > >> and/or check the content)
> > > > >>
> > > > >> :)
> > > > >>
> > > > >> adam
> > > > >>
> > > > >>
> > > > >> On Fri, 2010-06-18 at 06:57 +1200, John Curwood wrote:
> > > > >>> Hi Chris,
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> Sorry for the delay in replying, the manual is shaping up very
> nicely,
> > > > >>> you are doing a great job for your first documentation effort.  I
> had
> > > > >>> not herd of FSlint before you asked to create a manual for it,
> but I
> > > > >>> think I will have to get a copy.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> In terms of pointers here are a few Ideas I have:
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> When it comes to writing style, you need a clear idea of the
> intended
> > > > >>> audience for your manual (are they complete novices or are they
> > > > >>> technically adept and just need a few pointers).  It sounds like
> you are
> > > > >>> leaning more towards the novice end of the scale so to help get a
> feel
> > > > >>> for how it would read get someone you know who falls into that
> category
> > > > >>> to read the manual and see how much they understand or get out of
> it and
> > > > >>> make a note of their comments for helping to target that
> audience.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> They way I would set up each chapter is at the start give a small
> talk
> > > > >>> about the tool covered in that chapter and why you would use it
> before
> > > > >>> going into the graphical Interface and command line sections.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> For examples of entries in the command line I would use the
> 'Formatted'
> > > > >>> style in the editor to separate it from the standard text.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> I would probably include a chapter on downloading and installing
> on
> > > > >>> different systems (e.g. debian, ubuntu, fetora, etc), especially
> if the
> > > > >>> manual is aimed towards the novice user.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> And Finally if you click on the 'Arange Manual Index' link on the
> FSlint
> > > > >>> web home page, you can split the manual up into sections using
> the 'Add
> > > > >>> Section' button.  My personal taste would be to split the manual
> into 3
> > > > >>> sections:
> > > > >>> 1- Introduction.  This would include the introduction chapter,
> the
> > > > >>> Installation chapter (if you decide to add one) and maybe the
> common
> > > > >>> interface items chapter.
> > > > >>> 2- Using FSlint.  This would include everything from the
> Duplicates
> > > > >>> Chapter down to the Redundant White Spaces Chapter.
> > > > >>> 3- Appendix.  This would include Other Command Line Tools and the
> > > > >>> Credits Chapter.
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> At the end of the day, most of these comments are more personal
> > > > >>> taste/style rather than actual criticisms so feel free to use
> them or
> > > > >>> not. :-)
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> Keep up the Great Work!
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> cheers,
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> John
> > > > >>>
> > > > >>> On Mon, 2010-06-14 at 18:22 -0500, Chris Stackpole wrote:
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Good afternoon,
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I am working on my first FLOSS manual and while it is not yet
> ready to
> > > > >> be released I am at the point where I would like some feedback. I
> do not
> > > > >> consider myself a writer, however, I was inspired to give writing
> a
> > > > >> manual a try after the demonstrations at the Texas Linux Fest.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> FSlint is not a large program and I am not connected to the
> developers.
> > > > >> I just use this software a lot and figured I would try my first
> manual
> > > > >> on something I knew rather well.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> There is one thing that is bothering me about what I have posted
> so far.
> > > > >> I tend to want specific instructions and precise details. So that
> is
> > > > >> what I wrote. I wrote what I would like to see reading about this
> > > > >> software and I posted screenshots that I thought were useful and
> > > > >> relevant. However, I think I may be too concise in my wording and
> may
> > > > >> have over done the screenshots. There are a few chapters that are
> a tad
> > > > >> short.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I would really appreciate any feedback anyone may have for me. I
> am
> > > > >> fully aware I have a ways to go and I would love a few pointers in
> the
> > > > >> right direction. I do not mind criticism as long as I also know
> why and
> > > > >> what I may do to improve the situation.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Thanks everyone. I appreciate your time and help!
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Chris Stackpole
> > > > >>
> > > > >>
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