[FM Discuss] Thunderbird Installation Chapters Proofread Request

[Martin Kean]

Hi,

I've also reviewed and edited these chapters:

> INSTALLATION
> - WINDOWS
> - OS X
> - UBUNTU
> - OTHER LINUX DISTRIBUTIONS
> - REMOVING THUNDERBIRD

I did correct a few grammatical errors.
cheers, Martin
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From: discuss-bounces at lists.flossmanuals.net [discuss-bounces at lists.flossmanuals.net] On Behalf Of Lachlan Musicman [datakid at gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, 17 November 2010 11:22 a.m.
To: discuss at lists.flossmanuals.net
Subject: Re: [FM Discuss] Thunderbird Installation Chapters Proofread Request

On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 08:39, Mark <mark.brennan at gmx.com> wrote:
> Hello All -
>
> I would l like to ask list members for help with proofreading the five
> chapters on installing and uninstalling Thunderbird. The five chapters are
> listed below.
>
> INSTALLATION
> - WINDOWS
> - OS X
> - UBUNTU
> - OTHER LINUX DISTRIBUTIONS
> - REMOVING THUNDERBIRD
>
> When you are finished, please change the chapter status from "to be proofed"
> to "complete". If you find any errors or mistakes that must be corrected,
> please feel free to either make the correction yourself or post the
> correction to the list and someone from the Thunderbird team will do it.

All looked good to me. I've marked all as complete as per your
request. I have two suggestions, which I'm wasn't sure about so I
didn't add them myself:

 - on the OSX page it mentions "open the disk image". I would add "(eg
Thunderbird.x.x.x.dmg file)" although then I remembered that OSX often
hides extensions and this may not be useful.
 - on the Remove Thunderbird page, it is very literal. I would suggest
that you add a line to each OS stating something like: "If you want to
keep/backup/archive your Thunderbird mail folders, you can find them
/in/this/directory/. they look like *.mbox" (if they are mbox, sorry
haven't used TB in a while.)

Otherwise "complete"!

cheers
L.
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