[FM Discuss] eloquent js

[helen varley jamieson]

i'm having a look at this this afternoon & have started making some 
minor corrections :)

towards the end of the introduction, the author describes a console that 
can be accessed from the bottom of the browser; i'm not sure if he's 
referring to the error console that i can access from the tools menu or 
something different - what he describes isn't exactly the same. maybe 
it's something that was built into a previous version of the book? also, 
he talks about being able to run the scripts that are given as examples, 
but again i don't see the arrows he's talking about. unless these things 
are going to be in the final version, the text should be edited to 
remove the instructions.

also, the <pre> tag has been used to create beige boxes for the code 
examples, which looks good in the edit view of the pages. but in the 
"view" view, these boxes are not displaying. is there a different tag 
that should be used?

h : )

On 18/04/11 10:42 PM, Elisa Godoy de Castro Guerra wrote:
> Hello,
>
> The book is excellent ! The french team is very happy to translate it 
> ! It's true before translating, the book need to have a better 
> organisation for booki.
>
> As i can see the chapter are very long. I think we can had some. 
> Furthermore, the author have put on the book a lot of <hr /> => which 
> is a simple line. Probably, the author put this line when he change 
> the subject. I think a subtitle was much better.
>
> Anyone want put a subtitle in the place of the line ? Helen maybe ? 
> Adam tell me that you make a wonderful job in the How to bypass 
> Internet book ?
>
> My English is not so good to found a good subtitle as your :)
>
> Thanks,
> Elisa
>
>
> 2011/4/18 Elisa Godoy de Castro Guerra <elisa.dcg at gmail.com 
> <mailto:elisa.dcg at gmail.com>>
>
>     2011/4/18 adam <adam at xs4all.nl <mailto:adam at xs4all.nl>>
>
>         hi,
>
>         Elisa recently imported a very nice manual that has existed
>         for a while:
>         http://eloquentjavascript.net/
>
>         As I understand it Elisa got permission from the author to
>         include it in fm and wants to translate it to French (Elisa
>         imported it from an epub)...
>
>
>
>     Yep, tuukah help me on creating a good epub :)
>
>
>         Its a *great* book but I think we need to clean up the layout
>         a little. Anyone want to help go through it and just tighten
>         up the look and feel?
>         http://booki.flossmanuals.net/contents-eloquent-javascript/edit/
>
>         adam
>
>
>
>
>         -- 
>
>
>         --
>         Adam Hyde
>         Founder FLOSS Manuals
>         Project Manager Booki
>         Book Sprint Facilitator
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>
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