[FM Discuss] federated publishing

[adam]

cool ta...i changed 'provisions' in :
"In fact proprietary behaviour also pervades content that is purportedly
offered for free, but comes encumbered with provisions that restrict its 
use and evolution."

to

"provisions and practices"

adam

On 10/10/2011 04:26 PM, Andy Oram wrote:
> Yes, I understand some passages I didn't understand before. Here is
> another version with some polishing, and maybe one new idea.
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