[FM Discuss] new firefox and etherpad manuals could do with a review

[John Curwood]

Hi Mick
I'm moving house today so wont have time right now. However it is a long weekend here so I will have a look over the weekend.
Cheers
Johm


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From: Mick Fuzz <mickfuzz at clearerchannel.org> 
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Subject: [FM Discuss] new firefox and etherpad manuals could do with a review 
 
Hi there,

There are a couple of new manuals that could do with a review if anyone
fancies spending an hour or so having a look.

One is for Etherpad, a collaborative real time writing tool.
http://en.flossmanuals.net/etherpad

Another is a summary of Firefox or 'Firefox in a Nutshell'. It is edited
down from existing materials on Firefox already on FM.
http://en.flossmanuals.net/summary-of-firefox

One of the reasons they are edited down to be shorter is to make them
easier to translate. They will shortly be translated to Farsi. So part
of the hard work has been working out what to leave out. Thanks for the
feedback on Add Ons, I've tried to include as much as I could.

It would be great to get feedback on any of the following issues: is the
writing clear, where could it be clearer, is the order it is written
logical, does the order progress from needing now knowledge to more
specialised areas, could the material be useful in hand outs, are
chapters self contained, is the material easy to translate, are there
any problem areas??

nice one
Mick


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