[FM Discuss] New PR draft

[Emma Jane Hogbin]

Adam,

I really like the revised release!

Now that the focus is truly the embeddedness of the shop, I think it
would be good to include the "note on income generated from book sales"
from the bookstore page near the bottom of the release (i.e. cost +
2Euros, no commissions available).

I've added a few very minor formatting notes below:

adam hyde wrote:
> All manuals produced in FLOSS Manuals are written by a community, of a
> high quality, and are available free online; however, many people prefer
> to read paper versions, or they may wish to give books to friends to
> promote Free and Open Source Software. Hence the launch of the FLOSS
> Manuals Bookstore."It's all about promoting free software" says Adam

Space required between Bookstore. and "It's

> The FLOSS Manuals Book Store can be embedded in a website by cutting and
> pasting a few lines of code, and we encourage anyone to add it to their
> own blogs and homepages. This is truly Web 2.0 meeting the publishing
> world: "We don't need a physical shop to sell the books when we have the

I would use a comma instead of a full colon before the beginning of the
quote...because....

> It's all in place now and the first titles available include three
> manuals : One Laptop per Child, Sugar, and Inkscape. These will soon be
> followed by books about Audacity, FLOSS Manuals, Wikimedia Commons, and
> Pure Data.

I think there should be no space between manuals and :.


regards,
emma

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