[FM Discuss] New PR draft

[adam hyde]

ok, cool

for the last point, hows this:
"Note on manual pricing : All manuals have a 2 euro ($2.50 US Dollar)
mark-up that goes back into the development of the documentation.
Manuals can always be downloaded for free from FLOSS Manuals. Currently
there is no commission available for sales generated from hosted web
shops."

as a last paragraph line before the contact information


adam


On Sun, 2008-10-19 at 14:34 -0400, Emma Jane Hogbin wrote:
> Adam,
> 
> I really like the revised release!
> 
> Now that the focus is truly the embeddedness of the shop, I think it
> would be good to include the "note on income generated from book sales"
> from the bookstore page near the bottom of the release (i.e. cost +
> 2Euros, no commissions available).
> 
> I've added a few very minor formatting notes below:
> 
> adam hyde wrote:
> > All manuals produced in FLOSS Manuals are written by a community, of a
> > high quality, and are available free online; however, many people prefer
> > to read paper versions, or they may wish to give books to friends to
> > promote Free and Open Source Software. Hence the launch of the FLOSS
> > Manuals Bookstore."It's all about promoting free software" says Adam
> 
> Space required between Bookstore. and "It's
> 
> > The FLOSS Manuals Book Store can be embedded in a website by cutting and
> > pasting a few lines of code, and we encourage anyone to add it to their
> > own blogs and homepages. This is truly Web 2.0 meeting the publishing
> > world: "We don't need a physical shop to sell the books when we have the
> 
> I would use a comma instead of a full colon before the beginning of the
> quote...because....
> 
> > It's all in place now and the first titles available include three
> > manuals : One Laptop per Child, Sugar, and Inkscape. These will soon be
> > followed by books about Audacity, FLOSS Manuals, Wikimedia Commons, and
> > Pure Data.
> 
> I think there should be no space between manuals and :.
> 
> 
> regards,
> emma
> 
-- 
Adam Hyde
Founder FLOSS Manuals
http://www.flossmanuals.net