[FM Discuss] FLOSS Manual for FSlint

[Chris Stackpole]

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Janet Swisher wrote:
> Use the second person instead of the third person. That is, say "you"
> instead of "the user" or "the reader". It's more personal and
> engaging. And it's perfectly OK in technical writing, in spite of
> anything your high school English teacher might have said. :-) It's
> also helpful in avoiding many uses of passive voice.


Thanks for the suggestion. There were definitely times in which I was
trying to distinguish between the reader and a generic computer user and
found it difficult. I have already updated those portions that I was
trying to make that separation and I am reading through it again to see
if there are other spots that would benefit from the change.

Thanks to everyone who has given me help and suggestions!

Chris Stackpole
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