[FM Discuss] FLOSS Manual for FSlint

[Janet Swisher]

One more suggestion:

Use the second person instead of the third person. That is, say "you"
instead of "the user" or "the reader". It's more personal and
engaging. And it's perfectly OK in technical writing, in spite of
anything your high school English teacher might have said. :-) It's
also helpful in avoiding many uses of passive voice.

--Janet


On Sun, Jun 20, 2010 at 9:48 AM, Chris Stackpole <c.stackpole at gmail.com> wrote:
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