[FM Discuss] Review wanted of Phaser Book

[mick at flossmanuals.net]

Hi there,

I've done a first draft of Part One of a book on learning how to code by
making games here.
http://write.flossmanuals.net/learn-javascript-with-phaser/

It would be great to get feedback. What would you change? what's just
wrong? what's missing?
Just do Part One if that's ok. I'll use your feedback in doing Part Two

Could you put your comments here
https://public.etherpad-mozilla.org/p/review-phaser-book

Feel free to edit typo/s or messy writing directly if you already have a
log in, or email me if you don't.

Many thanks
Mick