[FM Discuss] Review wanted of Phaser Book

[mick at flossmanuals.net]

Many thanks Dharitree,

Yes I was thinking by the end of the month as  a deadline for feedback.

Then I can try to do a completed draft of the book in time for a soft
launch at Mozilla Festival at the end of October where we are doing a
workshop on this.
https://github.com/MozillaFestival/mozfest-program-2018/issues/359

Thanks again
Mick


On 15/09/18 14:33, Dharitree Joshi wrote:
> Hello Nick,
>
> I will go through the first draft. I have a login, I think I will be
> able to do the corrections myself. If not I will get back to you.
>
> I wanted to know, is there a date in your mind, when you would like to
> have the first draft reviewed? Do let me know.
>
> Thanks again.
>
> Best regards,
> Dharitree
>
>
>

On 15/09/18 14:27, mick at flossmanuals.net wrote:
> Hi there,
>
> I've done a first draft of Part One of a book on learning how to code by
> making games here.
> http://write.flossmanuals.net/learn-javascript-with-phaser/
>
> It would be great to get feedback. What would you change? what's just
> wrong? what's missing?
> Just do Part One if that's ok. I'll use your feedback in doing Part Two
>
> Could you put your comments here
> https://public.etherpad-mozilla.org/p/review-phaser-book
>
> Feel free to edit typo/s or messy writing directly if you already have a
> log in, or email me if you don't.
>
> Many tha