[FM Discuss] manual help-...url is here

[Andy Oram]

I thought the second and third chapter should be combined,
so I tried that.

Andy

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From: adam at flossmanuals.net
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Sent: Sunday, November 20, 2011 6:31:37 AM
Subject: [FM Discuss] manual help-...url is here

thanks aco for setting up the mirror. I updated the book:

if anyone can help please improve at the three first chapters of the manual:
http://booki.flossmanuals.net/freedom-fone/_edit/

These three need to kick off the manual but need to be really punchy. At
the moment they are not connected well (dont provide a good flow) and they
lack punch.

Feel free to rearrange/edit/cut/rewrite.

Any help is very much appreciated. I will check it tomorrow since the net
access here is very limited.

adam



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